Talk:Soviet destroyer Soobrazitelny (1940)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 05:24, 30 September 2019 (UTC)

A few pretty minor things on a ship that apparently led a charmed life:

• suggest lk=on for the first displacement conversion
• suggest lk=in for the first mention of knots in the body
• main guns protected by gunshields?
• add (AA) after Anti-aircraft
• in the body, specify that the 45 mm guns were single mounts
• fix the rounding for the 21.0 in conversion to get rid of the .0
• Soviet Naval→Soviet naval or alternatively "Soviet Naval Command" if that was a thing
• "In the event of war"
• for "nuclear, biological, and chemical" link CBRN defense
• comma after "former magazines"
• link destroyer leader and cruiser
• Ai-todor cape? Ai-Todor Cape maybe?
• link icebreaker
• link Novorossiysk
• Novy Svet bay→Novy Svet Bay
• Severnaya bay→Severnaya Bay, there is another example
• rounding for (12.0 in)
• survived a 2 July large air raid→ survived a large air raid on 2 July
• link hospital ship
• the idea that File:Guns of the Soobrazitelny.jpg was taken by a US employee is stretching the bounds of credibility given it is just downloaded from the internet
  • The image is actually from an official wartime USN publication, although I'm certain that it was a Soviet press photo incorporated into the report.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 13:28, 30 September 2019 (UTC)

That's it from me. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 07:02, 30 September 2019 (UTC)

Thanks for the thorough review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 13:28, 30 September 2019 (UTC)

No worries. This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, contains no plagiarism, and is illustrated by an acceptably licensed image with an appropriate caption. Passing. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 00:33, 1 October 2019 (UTC)