Talk:Soviet cruiser Admiral Isachenkov/GA1

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 01:15, 19 November 2020 (UTC)Reply


I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:15, 19 November 2020 (UTC)Reply

  • No DABs, external links working
  • Images properly licensed
  • When was the sale to Indian scrappers?
    • I don't know, except that it was after 23 September 1992.
  • Explain what L/80 means
    • I believe it was the calibre but that is not made clear in the literature.
  • What purpose does the MG-35 sonar have?
    • That is not made clear in the reference - maybe it was navigational?
  • In the infobox, add the type of radars to their names

  Done

  • As a Kresta II-class cruiser, Admiral Isachenkov

  Done

  • Be consistent about using a colon after NATO reporting name

  Done

  • Link steam turbine, surface-to-air missile, Captain 2nd rank, sister ship, Libya

  Done

  • Spell out DP on first use in the main body and link

  Done

  • What do you mean by dual-role torpedoes?

  Done Both anti-ship and anti-submarine - I have clarified in the text. and the two Volga "the"? two of each type?   Done Ambiguity removed

  • a hyphen on "hull mounted", "fire control", "direction finding", satellite navigation, satellite communication and "radar jamming"

  Done Although satellite communication and navigation are conventionally not hyphenated so I have left these stet.

  • Sonars don't go in a radardome

  Done Should be radome

  Done

  • for Soviet deputy "the" and what was his full title? Deputy commissar?

  Done I don't know, so I have changed that.

  • Explain that Kiev was an aircraft carrier before giving her name. Always explain what type a ship is when introducing it

  Done

  • the Soviet vessels, such as HMS Ardent, Move the British ship name in front of "the Soviet vessels

  Done

  • undertaking repairs and being upgraded with URPK-5 Rastrub (SS-N-14B) which added anti-ship capability. Put in past tense and rephrase

  Done

  • On the return to service, awkward

  Done

  • rather than having great expense spent on upgrades and repairs, on 3 July 1992 was decommissioned Rephrase and put in past tense

  Done

  • Indian company to the broken up "be"

  Done

  Done

  • A few small things remain.
  • Hyphenate dual purpose gun
  • Translated titles use title case
  • The navy cost of upgrades
  • Politician should be replaced with "official" as most admirals aren't officially politicians--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 12:35, 9 December 2020 (UTC)Reply