Talk:Soulmates (Parks and Recreation)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Queenieacoustic (talk) 19:41, 12 May 2011 (UTC)

I'll review the article tomorrow. Queenieacoustic (talk) 19:41, 12 May 2011 (UTC)

I am terribly sorry for the time it has taken for me to review this, but I've been very busy and have just not found the time to read the article. Again, I am terribly sorry, and I hope you can forgive me. Queenieacoustic (talk) 12:53, 15 May 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Plot

Nothing here.

Production

1. ...who he previously played him in the second season episodes "The Camel" and "Telethon". Remove "him".

Cultural references

Nothing here.

Reception

1. "delivered just the right amount to Creep out Leslie (and) keep me in fits of laughter". Although I assume it is copy-pasted from the review, I still wonder why "Creep" is starts with a capitalized letter?
2. ...because takes the time to develop it "invests in its characters... Poorly worded. Remove "takes the time to develop" since it seems really out of place.

Lead

Nothing here either.

Closing comments

So as you see, just some slight mistakes need to be fixed until the article can pass for GA. I'll put it on hold for seven days so that this overall well-written article can be perfected. Good luck! (Again, sorry for the long wait) Queenieacoustic (talk) 12:53, 15 May 2011 (UTC)

• I think I've addressed everything, but let me know if you have anything more. Thanks! — Hunter Kahn 15:04, 15 May 2011 (UTC)

Looks good to me. Pass! Queenieacoustic (talk) 15:39, 15 May 2011 (UTC)

It is mentioned that Adam Sandler is the "late Adam Sandler". Adam Sandler isn't dead, this needs to be corrected. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Shadevil75 (talk • contribs) 14:40, 9 June 2011 (UTC)