Talk:Some Kind of Bliss/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 21:03, 27 August 2015 (UTC)

• and songwriter → Omit, she's not known for being a songwriter
• from Impossible Princess on → from the album on
• Minogue had written → Minogue co-wrote
• reviews were positive → reviews are positive
• song writing → One word
• To promote "Some Kind of Bliss", she performed → Music video is also promo, and should be included in this para
• including Confide in Me (2002), Kylie Minogue: Artist Collection (2004), and Confide in Me: The Irresistible Kylie. → Year for last album
• was particularly awarded critical acclaim from music critics → received acclaim from critics for her experimentation with
• and was mixed by → Link mixed
• Adrian Denning from his own website → I'm dubious about the reliability of this source
• until it was surpassed by "Into the Blue" → Surpassed is the wrong word, because it charted lower.
• The Official Chart Company → Move 'The' outside of the link, that's not part of the title anymore
• I don't think John's single has anything to do with this. If it barred it from number one and debuted at number two, then yeah maybe. But not for debuting at 22. That means 20 other songs also out performed it that week
• Minogue and Fletcher in front of a shop. → Missing word, doesn't make full sense
• Idolator website created a list for Minogue's eight sexiest videos, and listed the video for "Some Kind of Bliss" as one of those eight. → Which number?
• Robbie Daw said → Publication?
• Ref 3: Link Youtube
• Refs 4, 6 and 31 have "" double quotes in their titles. Use ' instead for titles.
• Swap the linking of Allmusic and Rovi in 20 for 8, as it's the first usage.
• External links. Link to the music video on Youtube?

Outcome

On hold  — Calvin999 21:16, 27 August 2015 (UTC)

@Calvin99: Finished at adjustments that are noted above. CaliforniaDreamsFan (talk · contribs} 03:32, 28 August 2015 (UTC)

Passing.  — Calvin999 07:43, 28 August 2015 (UTC)