Talk:Somalia at the 2008 Summer Olympics
Latest comment: 8 years ago by Jaguar in topic GA Review
Somalia at the 2008 Summer Olympics has been listed as one of the Sports and recreation good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: October 16, 2016. (Reviewed version). |
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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 14:55, 16 October 2016 (UTC)
Will do this soon. JAGUAR 14:55, 16 October 2016 (UTC)
- "since its debut in 1972" - in the 1972 Games
- "Omar's story was covered by the media at the time" - for unfamiliar readers it would be better to briefly explained what happened. How about Omar's disappearance?
- "Abdinasir Said Ibrahim was chosen to compete in the Men's 5000 m and Samiya Yuusf Omar in the Women's 200 m" - write out metres
- No dead links
- No DAB links
When I joined the competition I thought to myself "right, I'm going to make these reviews as comprehensive as I can"! Unfortunately those were the only issues I could find with this, otherwise this almost meets the criteria. JAGUAR 17:39, 16 October 2016 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review. I've only added a little to the lead on Omar, as I was referring to the media coverage at the time of the Games rather than in 2012 regarding her death. It was because of the work on this article that I ended up working up her's too. Miyagawa (talk) 17:44, 16 October 2016 (UTC)
- Thanks! I'll probably review that article once I'm finished with this batch. Promoted JAGUAR 17:55, 16 October 2016 (UTC)