Talk:Sociology of leisure/GA1
Latest comment: 14 years ago by Nikkimaria in topic GA Review
GA Review edit
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Reviewer: Nikkimaria (talk) 03:23, 26 March 2010 (UTC)
As discussed at the draft GA nom, I believe this article meets the criteria. Here are some further suggestions for improvement:
- Over-linking: some terms are linked multiple times, some commonplace terms are linked unnecessarily.
- Prose: good enough for GA standard, but would recommend finding someone to copy-edit
- Some of the "Further reading" entries could be incorporated as references or used to expand the article
- An image would be nice
Otherwise, looks good. I'm going to pass it now, but I encourage you to keep working on it to make it even better. Cheers, Nikkimaria (talk) 03:23, 26 March 2010 (UTC)