Talk:Societal marketing
Latest comment: 2 years ago by Rjbranch in topic Corporate Social Responsibility (CSR) section
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Corporate Social Responsibility (CSR) section edit
The CSR section of this article reads strangely to me. It doesn't feel like Wikipedia content.
Specifically, the mention of the Häagen-Dazs company has no associated citation, and doesn't give enough context to understand the meaning of "what Häagen-Dazs is doing". At the very least, the referenced "microsite" should itself be linked as further reading for context (although in my personal opinion that would border on using Wikipedia to promote a brand).
Apologies that I can't provide a more thorough explanation. I'm no expert when it comes to Wikipedia or the style guidelines; almost all of my edits relate to fixing pure factual errors.