Talk:So Yesterday/GA1

Latest comment: 13 years ago by Petergriffin9901 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: --CallMeNathanTalk2Me 22:40, 8 December 2010 (UTC)Reply

Lead

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  • breakup with her boyfriend declaring -> boyfriend,
  • contemporary critics -> I don't think we can call them contemporary lol.
  • who broke up with her -> I don't like this, try re-wording
  • and Best of Hilary Duff (2008). It is also featured on the music video game Band Hero -> make one sentence. (2008) and on the music
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Background

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  • I don't see how the first 3 lines are relevant to this article. This is not her singing debut. It would go well on her bio or first single.
  • by "The Matrix", for Metamorphosis -> too repetitive. Try the album
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Composition

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  • Nice

Release and reception

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  • Really nice!

Chart performance

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  • Good

Music video

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  • Good

Live performances

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  • Nice

Overall

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