Talk:Snakehead (Fringe)/GA1

Latest comment: 13 years ago by Queenieacoustic in topic GA Review

GA Review

edit

Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · Watch

Reviewer: Queenieacoustic (talk) 13:43, 23 June 2011 (UTC)Reply

Comments

edit

Plot

edit
  1. "Seasickness" should not be in quotes.
  2. "In the lab, Walter (John Noble) posits they are gigantic parasitic worms," Replace "they" with "the creatures" or something similar.
  3. "They discover a Triad gang member and ties to several shell companies the gang has set up in the U.S." To eliminate confusion, replace "they" with who that are being mentioned (the Fringe team?).

Production

edit

Nothing here.

Reception

edit
Ratings
edit

Nothing here.

Reviews
edit
  1. "Critical reception to the episode was generally negative." Replace "to" with "for".
  2. "AOL TV's Jane Boursaw believed the worms 'seriously freaky'" Add "were" after "worms".
  3. Ref 12 links to Kuro5hin, a website which uses user-generated articles as its contents. Unfortunately, per point 2b of the good article criteria, sites like the one used are not considered reliable, and should never be used on Wikipedia.

Lead

edit

Nothing here.

In conclusion

edit

As usual, a fine article that is close to GA. I'll put it on hold for seven days so that you can make the necessary fixes. Good luck!

I replaced the Kuro5hin ref with 2 better ones, and made your other suggested changes. Thanks very much for the review! :) Ruby2010 comment! 15:13, 23 June 2011 (UTC)Reply
Nice work! Passed. Queenieacoustic (talk) 16:45, 23 June 2011 (UTC)Reply