Talk:Smin Awa Naing

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The result was: promoted by RoySmith (talk15:30, 10 December 2022 (UTC)Reply

  • ... that Smin Awa Naing's regiment mortally wounded Crown Prince Minye Kyawswa of Ava, effectively ending Ava's most serious invasion of the Hanthawaddy Kingdom? Source: Chronicle sources on the actual battle of Dala: (Maha Yazawin Vol. 2 2006: 48), (Yazawin Thit Vol. 1 2012: 259) and (Hmannan Vol. 2 2003: 43)
    Academic sources on the battle being the height of the war, and how "little more fighting" (Harvey 1925: 95) continued listlessly and "half-heartedly", (Htin Aung 1967: 92–93)

Created by Hybernator (talk). Self-nominated at 22:24, 20 November 2022 (UTC).Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough

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QPQ: Done.

Overall:   Mostly fine except for what I commented on above. As soon as that's addressed, the hook will be ready. An anonymous username, not my real name 01:57, 23 November 2022 (UTC)Reply

An anonymous username, not my real name, thanks for the review. That it was the height the war was mentioned in the article with a couple of academic citations. I've rewritten the sentence for better clarity. Please review again. Thanks. Hybernator (talk) 01:52, 24 November 2022 (UTC)Reply
Thank you for the speedy improvement. It's all good now   An anonymous username, not my real name 02:17, 24 November 2022 (UTC)Reply