Talk:Slalom (video game)/GA1
Latest comment: 8 years ago by Tintor2 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Tintor2 (talk · contribs) 20:19, 20 August 2015 (UTC)
This looks like a very well done article. I would pass it already but there are some things I would like to change:
- The lead is too short and fails WP:Lead. Expand it to at least two paragraphs and it may work.
- The infobox references only date. I can see the development section already cites the other references so it should be mantained consistent.
- The reference "Rare, ed. (1986), Slalom Instruction Booklet, Redmond, WA: Nintendo" looks a bit out of place. Seperate it from the others. I would suggest using Zero (Mega Man)#References as an example.
And that's all. Good work