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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 17:55, 31 March 2021 (UTC)
Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 17:55, 31 March 2021 (UTC)
Basic stuff and comments edit
- Try moving references in the lead to the body of the article.
- Add a serial comma after "e-girls".
- Add a comma after the first use of "Too Short".
- What could possibly help readers in describing "Mr. Simp Sexual"?
- The term is usually employed (at least in memes) alongside a sort of character vignette, whose description is otherwise lacking from the article. I chose this one since it's not just a random post, it's a post that is deliberately included as an exemplar of the archetype in an article from a reliable source. jp×g 20:12, 31 March 2021 (UTC)
- "described use of" → "described the use of"
- Remove the comma after "written on it".
- "time of announcement" → "time of the announcement"
- References are already archived.
- Optional, but linking sources through "|website=" helps readers.
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@Some Dude From North Carolina: Modifications have been made, what do you think? jp×g 20:18, 31 March 2021 (UTC)