Talk:Simon Holloway

Latest comment: 3 years ago by Doomsdayer520 in topic Feedback from New Page Review process

Feedback from New Page Review process edit

I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: Thank you for this new article, but note that other editors have raised issues with the writing style. Wikipedia writing should be encyclopedic and should avoid promotional or personal prose. For pointers, follow the links in the notice at the top of the article..

DOOMSDAYER520 | TALK | CONTRIBS 20:26, 22 October 2020 (UTC)Reply