Talk:Siddhantasara

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by The Squirrel Conspiracy (talk) 19:05, 12 August 2020 (UTC)

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• ... that in Siddhantasara, Manilal Dwivedi refutes the idea of genesis as told in the Old Testament? Source: Suhrud, Tridip (2009). "Love, Desire and Moksha: Manibhai Nabhubhai and the Loss of Svadharma". Writing Life: Three Gujarati Thinkers. Hyderabad: Orient Blackswan. ISBN 978-81-250-3043-0. p. 157.

• Reviewed: QPQ will be done by my fellow Wikipedian User:Nizil Shah. Willenhall house

Improved to Good Article status by Gazal world (talk). Self-nominated at 11:48, 22 July 2020 (UTC).

• It is almost two weeks since this nomination was submitted and no QPQ has been provided. The nominator has more than five DYK credits, therefore QPQ is required. Please take care of this within one week. Thank you. Flibirigit (talk) 00:53, 5 August 2020 (UTC)

Pinging Nizil Shah for QPQ. --Gazal world (talk) 09:14, 5 August 2020 (UTC)

@Flibirigit: Sorry for delay. QPQ submitted now. -Nizil (talk) 05:30, 9 August 2020 (UTC)

Nomination needs a full review. Flibirigit (talk) 16:09, 9 August 2020 (UTC)

New enough GA. QPQ provided. Must assume good faith on the offline book source, but all the elements are in the proper places. Earwig turns up no problems. This is good to go. Raymie (t • c) 06:53, 11 August 2020 (UTC)

Copy edit request

@Gog the Mild: Hi Gog. After long time. Hope, you are doing well. I just finished my work on this article (as always, its a book by Manilal Dwivedi). Before I publish it, it would be appreciative if you can do copy-editing. Feel free to remove unnecessary details and modify article structure. As per your convenience. There are no any urgency. Thanks. --Gazal world (talk) 21:54, 4 October 2019 (UTC)

Hi Gazal world. Done. See what you think. Gog the Mild (talk) 16:21, 5 October 2019 (UTC)

@Gog the Mild: Great. Thank you very much. --Gazal world (talk) 16:40, 5 October 2019 (UTC)

@Gog the Mild: Hey Gog. Is it OK to mark this article as 'B-class' ? --Gazal world (talk) 13:42, 6 October 2019 (UTC)

Yes. Gog the Mild (talk) 15:19, 6 October 2019 (UTC)

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GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Siddhantasara/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Vami IV (talk · contribs) 22:28, 21 July 2020 (UTC)

Opening statement

Hello, and come what may from this review, thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia. During the review, I may make copyedits, which I will limit to spelling correction and minor changes to punctuation (removal of double spaces and such). I will only make substantive edits that change the flow and structure of the prose if I previously suggested and it is necessary. The Nominator(s) should understand that I am a grammar pedant, and I will nitpick in the interest of prose quality. For responding to my comments, please use  Done,  Fixed,  Added,  Not done,  Doing..., or  Removed, followed by any comment you'd like to make. I will be crossing out my comments as they are redressed, and only mine. A detailed, section-by-section review will follow. –♠Vami_IV†♠ 22:28, 21 July 2020 (UTC)

Prose

• All three paragraphs of the lead start with the title. To mitigate this, I suggest merging the second and third sentences, as both discuss the book's reception.

• Done --Gazal world (talk) 07:08, 22 July 2020 (UTC)

• Mesmerism is a pseudoscience.

• @Vami IV: What can we do here ? Please guide me. --Gazal world (talk) 07:08, 22 July 2020 (UTC)

• I recommend changing the "science" in based on the science of mesmerism to "pseudoscience", or delete it altogether. –♠Vami_IV†♠ 07:21, 22 July 2020 (UTC)

• Done Removed the word 'science. --Gazal world (talk) 07:48, 22 July 2020 (UTC)

• Manilal's theological conclusions are that Āryāvarta is the source of all religions; [...] Could you add a few words to clarify that Āryāvarta refers to a historic region of the Indian subcontinent?

• Done --Gazal world (talk) 07:08, 22 July 2020 (UTC)

• The last sentence of the second paragraph of "Methodology" should be moved into "Reception and criticism", and germinated into its own paragraph if material on criticism is abundant enough.

• Done --Gazal world (talk) 07:08, 22 July 2020 (UTC)

• Hello Vami_IV. Thanks for your comments. I have addressed all the issues. Please see. --Gazal world (talk) 07:48, 22 July 2020 (UTC)
  • Excellent. I'll be passing this article now. –♠Vami_IV†♠ 07:52, 22 July 2020 (UTC)

GA progress

Images are relevant and free/tagged. –♠Vami_IV†♠ 22:28, 21 July 2020 (UTC)

Article passes copyvio scanners with a mere 5.7% likelihood. –♠Vami_IV†♠ 22:28, 21 July 2020 (UTC)

Article is stable, with no major edits in months. –♠Vami_IV†♠ 22:28, 21 July 2020 (UTC)

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

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