Talk:Shut Up and Drive/GA1

Latest comment: 12 years ago by Jivesh boodhun in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Jivesh1205 (Talk) 17:25, 30 November 2011 (UTC)Reply

Get ready to be slayed. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 17:26, 30 November 2011 (UTC)Reply

I assume Te Amo will be finished first before any notion is thought about started this one. Calvin Watch n' Learn 18:55, 30 November 2011 (UTC)Reply
Yes. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 03:50, 1 December 2011 (UTC)Reply

Status?

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This review has been open for almost two weeks, with nothing to show so far. Please update on the status. If the reviewer is unable to complete the review in a timely manner, then allow another editor to take it over. AstroCog (talk) 15:01, 13 December 2011 (UTC)Reply

I will do it. I believe instead of doing hasty reviews, it is better to do a nice long review with practically every issues pointed out, right? Jivesh1205 (Talk) 15:07, 13 December 2011 (UTC)Reply
Detailed is good. But "hasty" and "timely" are not the same thing. I just wanted to make sure that this review was not forgotten. AstroCog (talk) 15:27, 13 December 2011 (UTC)Reply
Don't worry. I never forget something i take under my belt. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 15:29, 13 December 2011 (UTC)Reply
Media review
  • Music sample should be reduced to 21 second.
  • The image (in LP) and cover art are good (except remove the full stop).

Jivesh1205 (Talk) 15:25, 13 December 2011 (UTC)Reply

Fixed? Jivesh1205 (Talk) 18:34, 15 December 2011 (UTC)Reply
Not. But, will do it shortly.   DoneTomica1111Question Existing? 08:49, 16 December 2011 (UTC)Reply


I'll be finishing this review tomorrow. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 17:26, 18 December 2011 (UTC)Reply

I will fix the prose myself. But do the references when I post them. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 13:31, 24 December 2011 (UTC)Reply
Why are you doing it yourself Jivesh?? Be careful of being accused of being to closely linked to the article, because I am sure there are people who would fail this based on the fact that you are amending things and not Tomcia. Calvin Watch n' Learn 15:13, 25 December 2011 (UTC)Reply
It's ok. Many reviewers copy edit the article during their review and list issues if they are confused. —WP:PENGUIN · [ TALK ] 15:26, 25 December 2011 (UTC)Reply
Hmm okay. I just don't think it is a good way of reviewing. How is the nominator mean't to learn from their mistakes? I guess it is just my way of thinking. Calvin Watch n' Learn 15:28, 25 December 2011 (UTC)Reply
Wow, you really follow my contributions. Lol. And Calvin, do you learn from your mistakes? Remember what I did on "Te Amo"?Jivesh1205 (Talk) 15:29, 25 December 2011 (UTC)Reply
That's my point. But I can see what is happening now anyway. Calvin Watch n' Learn 15:32, 25 December 2011 (UTC)Reply
What is happening? — Tomica1111Question Existing? 15:33, 25 December 2011 (UTC)Reply
Stay calm please. It has been dealt with. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 15:37, 25 December 2011 (UTC)Reply
No, contrary Jivesh. I am just asking what is happening, cause I can not understand. — Tomica1111Question Existing? 15:38, 25 December 2011 (UTC)Reply
(edit conflict) I was actually talking about something else, but it doesn't matter. I've learn't not to say what I feel on here. Calvin Watch n' Learn 15:41, 25 December 2011 (UTC)Reply
(edit conflict)Read it from the beginning. I said I was going to c/e the article but Calvin said that it is not right from his pov. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 15:42, 25 December 2011 (UTC)Reply

The copy-edits I Made

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  • Lead   Done
  • Background and composition   Done
  • Critical reception   Done
  • Chart performance   Done
  • Music video   Done
  • Live performances   Done

Jivesh1205 (Talk) 13:05, 26 December 2011 (UTC)Reply

Thanks Jivesh. I am expecting the reference issues so I can resolve them. — Tomica1111Question Existing? 13:06, 26 December 2011 (UTC)Reply

Charts and certifications

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References

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Comment – The following is from her 2007 interview with Rolling Stone before the release of "Umbrella". It talks about the inspiration: "Cars and motor vehicles of all kinds are not exactly strange bedfellows with commercial music, usually with a specifically male connection - power, virility, the wind in your hair and all that jazz. This has been written principally by guys, but the innuendo here is all female, which is hardly surprising, because the lady simply oozes sexuality." You can add this for enhancing the section. — Legolas (talk2me) 17:00, 26 December 2011 (UTC)Reply

I will be posting more in an hour. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 14:05, 27 December 2011 (UTC)Reply
  • 1. Should be MTV News and should not be italicized.
  • 2. FMQB is a magazine and it should be in italics
  • 8. Pitchfork Media should no be in italics and the publisher is Ryan Schreiber
  • 10. PopMatters is self published and it should not be in italics.

Jivesh1205 (Talk) 14:05, 27 December 2011 (UTC)Reply

I am going to continue the review now. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 12:04, 29 December 2011 (UTC)Reply

More

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  • 11. Check the publisher.
  • 12. Why is Slant Magazine listed twice? It is not supposed to be in italics.
  • 14. Link everything there
  • 15. Use {{citeweb}}
  • 26. Link Rap-Up
  • 27. Unlink and be consistent.
  • 28. Link Apple Inc
  • 34. {{citeweb}}
  • 37 & 38. Over-linking of Discogs
  • 58. Remove ARIA Charts and have a look at how you wrote the date. Be consistent.
  • 59. Why is Ultratop 50 in italics? + date
  • 60. Why is Ultratop 40 in italics? + date
  • 61. Why is ChartsPlus in italics? + link The Official Charts Company + date
  • 64. Refer to FN 3

Overall, the article was quite underprepared but it will pass. :D Jivesh1205 (Talk) 12:26, 29 December 2011 (UTC)Reply

  Done all. Haha I couldn't understand your point, but it was very easy though xD ! — Tomica1111Question Existing? 12:36, 29 December 2011 (UTC)Reply
  • 12. Why did you unlink Slant Magazine?

Please fix ^^^ and I am passing the article.

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

Jivesh1205 (Talk) 05:19, 30 December 2011 (UTC)Reply