Talk:Shukri al-Quwatli/GA2

GA Review

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Reviewer: Cerebellum (talk · contribs) 13:12, 1 November 2015 (UTC)

Hello! I will be reviewing this article. --Cerebellum (talk) 13:12, 1 November 2015 (UTC)

This is an outstanding article! It easily meets the GA criteria. Pass. Still, below are some suggestions for further improvement:

• It might be more logical to move the "Family" section before the "Birth" section.
• The section "Arab Kingdom of Syria" does not link to Arab Kingdom of Syria or even mention the term. I think a main article link to Arab Kingdom of Syria would help.
• You could include info on how the Great Syrian Revolt ended. The article kind of skips from mid-1926, with bickering among opposition leaders, to political events in late 1927.

That's it! Great work! --Cerebellum (talk) 13:31, 1 November 2015 (UTC)

Thank you Cerebellum. I addressed your first two points and will address the third very soon. Cheers --Al Ameer (talk) 18:54, 1 November 2015 (UTC)