Talk:Shrew gymnure

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It would be great if you could find a few more references so that you can add in more information about the Shrew gymnure. It seems like you have a good general base of information, but it would be nice to have that fleshed out with more details. Having a variety of references will also add validity to your article. Leslier7 (talk) 06:53, 8 December 2016 (UTC)Leslie

The information seems accurate to me, but I would move the current last sentence in "diet" to another heading... maybe "reproduction" because it doesn't pertain to the eating habits of the animal. Also, there is good information under "behavior", but it does not really describe the behavior and would probably be more fitting if you changed the header to "habitat". With that being said, I would love to know more information about their behavior and just more detail about the shrew, as Leslie mentioned above. :) (Kelly Mercer) Knmercy13 (talk) 02:58, 9 December 2016 (UTC)

The first two sentences are pretty much plagiarized from http://www.tandfonline.com/doi/abs/10.3109/19401736.2012.744976 if they are not cited. Work on rewriting that part and citing more sources aw well. Also, you have short, choppy sentences that need to be combined... I have restructured a couple of them for you. This will be easier to do once you add more information. (Kelly Mercer)Knmercy13 (talk) 05:47, 9 December 2016 (UTC)

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