Talk:Shades of Cool/GA1

Latest comment: 9 years ago by IndianBio in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: IndianBio (talk · contribs) 10:10, 1 June 2015 (UTC)Reply

  • .. including Greece and France --> there's also Belgium and Spain I can see and possibly Italy
  • Del Rey's vocals span from A3 to B5 --> You can follow this with the chord progression from Musicnotes
  • Her "operatic" soprano blending --> It is not clear whether you are talking about her vocals or a blending machine (for the uninitiated) rephrase
  • Colin Stutz's review would be better if you make it a passive voice and not direct quote. It would be better understandable
  • The single line lyrics are not needed, make them write it in a sentence.
  • from MTV News called it "fifty shades of great" --> What does it mean? Would probably need a rephrasing
  • Chris Coplan of Consequence of Sound --> You gave the full name just in the above section
  • to a James Bond theme track --> in a James Bond theme track
  • observing that "Del Rey has never sounded better." --> Incomplete sentence, so period should be outside quote
  • The single was a top ten hit in Greece, peaking at number three on the Greece Digital Songs --> You need to mention this is Billboard Greece Digital Songs and not the one from IFPI Greece
  • The version, in which Del Rey is seen dead, was described as "darker" than the original video --> This version, in which Del Rey is seen dead, was described as "darker" than the original video. Also there needs to be further expansion on why Del Rey is dead in the video.
  • Ref 24, the FIMI link does not work. I know how to verify the chart position since that link is impossible to generate.

Short good article, on hold for seven days and this is an easy GA. —Indian:BIO [ ChitChat ] 10:10, 1 June 2015 (UTC)Reply

Passing since concerns have been addressed. —Indian:BIO [ ChitChat ] 13:27, 3 June 2015 (UTC)Reply