Talk:Seminole Hotel

Latest comment: 14 years ago by Richard asr in topic Copyedited

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Richard asr (talk) 21:26, 11 August 2010 (UTC)Reply

This article had a 'copyedit' tag attached to it from December 2008, hence my visit, since we are having a blitz on our backlog. I have altered the text a little, and put it into a couple of sections, pretty much tried to 'Wikify' it a little, but it didn't particularly need a copyedit (believe me, I have just done a few). It seems to form the nucleus of a very interesting article, and what is there would make a good section about halfway down the article, if you see what I mean. Well written and very interesting as social history, around the turn of the twentieth century (and to a Brit, very interesting as American history as well). But it needs a little more about the hotel itself, and how it fared up to modern times. Importantly, it needs inline citations. These should be easy to get from the references that I had a quick look at. Richard asr (talk) 21:51, 11 August 2010 (UTC)Reply