Talk:Sein und Zeit (The X-Files)/GA1

Latest comment: 12 years ago by Gen. Quon in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Lemonade51 (talk · contribs) 12:57, 29 May 2012 (UTC)Reply

Lead
  • "The episode received mixed to positive reviews from critics." → "It received mixed to positive reviews from critics"
  • "Several production issues plagued the episode, including the arrest of one crew member for possible kidnapped...", can this be rephrased; to me it reads grammatically incorrect.
  • You could make reference in the lead about the title, as you have done under Production; "is a reference to Martin Heidegger's best known work and means "Being and Time" in German". A short sentence would be fine.
Production
  • "WE've had people come up to us and", WE in caps needs changing.
Broadcast and reception
  • "Kenneth Silber from Space.com, although complimenting the focus on Samantha Mulder", spot the spelling mistake.

No major issues with plot, sourcing and images. On hold. -- Lemonade51 (talk) 12:57, 29 May 2012 (UTC)Reply

Thank you for your review. I believe I've addressed all the issues.--Gen. Quon (talk) 14:53, 29 May 2012 (UTC)Reply