Talk:Seethamma Vakitlo Sirimalle Chettu/GA1
Latest comment: 8 years ago by Jaguar in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 18:28, 26 September 2015 (UTC)
I'll finish this soon JAGUAR 18:28, 26 September 2015 (UTC)
Initial comments
edit- I would recommend merging the last paragraph into the fourth, per WP:LEADLENGTH
- "Produced by Dil Raju's Sri Venkateswara Creations, it features Daggubati Venkates" - would sound better as It was produced by Dil Raju's Sri Venkateswara Creations, and features Daggubati Venkates
- "the Good Samaritan teaches his sons and Geetha's father the value of spreading love in life; this is the film's centerpiece" - centrepiece
- "by his family, lives in the village of that name" - of the same name (minor)
- "At the wedding Peddodu and Geetha's father argue" - comma between "wedding" and "Peddodu"
- "Relangi Uncle is injured in an accident" - would "Uncle Relangi" be the correct order?
- "turns out to be the son of Peddodu's former boss's brother" - boss' (in this case)
- "...calls her by name instead of "Hey!" and "Oy!" They are married" - missing full stop
References
edit- References all check out, nice work
On hold
editAnother well written and comprehensive article, well done! I found no prose issues with the latter half of the article, however I did find a few minor issues with the lead (which can easily be addressed). Once all of the above are clarified this should easily pass JAGUAR 19:20, 28 September 2015 (UTC)
- @Jaguar: Thanks for the review, Jaguar. Your comments have been resolved. — Ssven2 Speak 2 me 01:13, 29 September 2015 (UTC)
- Thanks for addressing them, Ssven! This now meets the GA criteria and is good to go. Well done on writing another piece of quality work JAGUAR 17:05, 29 September 2015 (UTC)