Talk:Seedy Sunday

Latest comment: 9 years ago by Dcowan38 in topic Too cutesy

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Seems to have major issues of grammar and clarity, for example: "The local food and 100 mile diet trends are challenging the commodification of wheat, potatoes, beef, eggs and other foods is an economic model and ideal that is at the heart of global trade agreements. Yet Variety and farmer identification on the variety are worth money to chefs and consumers at the local level and in value chain marketing. Terroir Terroir is the interaction of the variety genetics and the environment and soil where the variety is grown. Terroir of a grape means the difference between a $5/bottle and $500/bottle of wine and is doing the same with common food crops in the 2000s marketplace." There's a lot more like that. Definitely needs cleaning up. Matt Lib Soc (talk) 20:49, 9 May 2011 (UTC)Reply

Unsourced, repetitive, and too long edit

Most of the text is unsourced and add so little new information that it warrants removal. Sminthopsis84 (talk) 00:50, 12 November 2012 (UTC)Reply

Too cutesy edit

Seriously: "In Canada, Seedy Saturdays and Seed Sundays continue to be grass-roots-organized events." Surely there is a better way of saying that? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Dcowan38 (talkcontribs) 21:17, 26 February 2014 (UTC)Reply

OK, it's been a few months, so I fixed it. Dcowan38 (talk) 18:15, 7 November 2014 (UTC)Reply