Talk:Secrets That I Never Want to Know/GA1

Latest comment: 12 years ago by Ruby2010 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Ruby2010 (talk · contribs) 05:58, 2 December 2011 (UTC)Reply

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

Comments

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  • There is one deadlink
  • "Desperate Housewives focuses on the lives of several residents..." Several?
  • "...who tells him that he will only be forgiven if he turns himself in;..." Insert bolded
  • "The episode is only one of two season premieres Cherry did not write himself, as he took on a reduced production role for the eighth season in order to develop a new series while Daily was given more creative authority.[14]" Insert bolded?
  • The last two sentences in the ratings paragraph are a little confusing. Are you talking about Pan Am or Desperate Housewives?
  • "The episode received mixed to positive critical reviews." -> "Secrets That I Never Want to Know" received mixed to positive critical reviews.
  • "generally positive" or "mixed to positive" reviews?
  • "...From the funny car theft scene to the ... housewives swim only scene, ..." I know this is a partial quote, but what does the bolded mean? Would it be more clear with the full quote?
  • "TV Fanatic's Christina Tran gave the episode a positive review, giving it 4 out of 5 stars.[25] " giving -> handing out?
  • "She also appreciated the writers' decision not to prolong Tom..." She -> Tran
  • Almost flawless referencing. Only issue: Ref 6: add date (7/18/2008)

Great, great article. But then again, your articles are always well written and sourced. Only minor issues above, and then I'll be happy to pass this one. Ruby 2010/2013 06:54, 2 December 2011 (UTC)Reply

Looks good. All changes have been addressed, so pass for GA. Nice work! Ruby 2010/2013 05:02, 5 December 2011 (UTC)Reply