Talk:Scott Schoeneweis

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What is so important about him and his mother being Jewish? TVRJomar 03:29, 17 September 2006 (UTC)Reply

No idea. There seems to be this huge desire to point out that he's Jewish, then I see someone wanting to hammer home that his mother is Jewish. No idea what this is about. --Deathphoenix ʕ 03:56, 17 September 2006 (UTC)Reply
I think mentioning Shoeneweis' Jewish background is interesting, but the current format of presenting it is awkward and borderline offensive. It would be one thing if we were clarifying why he can speak Hebrew but to just mention it out of the blue seems a little odd. Furthermore, there are no citations of any sort to back up the claim that his mother is Jewish. SERSeanCrane 22:25, 12 January 2007 (UTC)Reply
In addition I see that User:Threeafterthree has previously removed the content with the reasoning "reverted back to standard biographical usaged...please see WP:MOSBIO, thanks". I agree with this reasoning, but only in favor of moving his ethnicity to the opening paragraph where it belongs. Also, I am removing the trivia point until it can be backed up with a citation. SERSeanCrane 22:25, 12 January 2007 (UTC)Reply

I agree with the deletion of the trivia point, under the circumstances. --Epeefleche 22:36, 12 January 2007 (UTC)Reply

Why does it say Canada instead of Toronto? It is a little confusing, to say his time spent in Canada, as you would not say his time spent in America, or even Ohio, if he played for the Reds —Preceding unsigned comment added by 24.67.170.51 (talk) 00:52, 7 December 2007 (UTC)Reply

Look at this sentence

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In 2001, during which the Angels continued using him as a starter (beginning with opening day, he won a career-high 10 games and finished with a 5.08 ERA. He hit 14 batters (3rd in the American League).

One opening bracket and two closng brackets. I suspect the first closing bracket goes after opening day. 15:11, 24 June 2008 (UTC)

Good catch!--Ethelh (talk) 18:01, 26 February 2009 (UTC)Reply

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I think for B Class the content should be better organized, there are too many short and choppy paragraphs now. Hekerui (talk) 15:31, 9 May 2009 (UTC)Reply

Good point. I combined a few of the paragraphs, per your comment.--Ethelh (talk) 23:43, 9 May 2009 (UTC)Reply
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