Talk:Save the Plastic Bag Coalition v. City of Manhattan Beach
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editHello, I just wanted to add a quick comment, overall I think the page covers the topic really well. I made a few grammar edits but nothing major. Good job guys!
Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
editThis article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 13 February 2019 and 3 May 2019. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Uniquajanae.
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Too broad
editI feel like currently this article is discussing issues of plastic bag impact on the environment and plastic bag litigation at large - which is useful information but seems like it is better relegated to other articles, such as the article on plastic bags, or a subarticle on plastic bag litigation in general, linking to this one. It'll be a bit complex to split it up, but I think this is something that will need to get done. Dcoetzee 00:57, 23 May 2012 (UTC)
New Edits
editHello, I just wanted to let you know that I will be editing this article. I have a few ideas for improvements on each section. I will be sure to post what I'm thinking of changing beforehand. Please, feel free to let me know what you think of my ideas. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Uniquajanae (talk • contribs) 17:04, 26 February 2019 (UTC)
New Edits
editI have posted some ideas for a few potential edits, I will be implementing this week, to my sandbox User:Uniquajanae/sandbox.savetheplasticbagmanhattan. Please take a look at my ideas and let me know what you think. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Uniquajanae (talk • contribs) 17:01, 27 February 2019 (UTC)
Deleting Sections
editI will be deleting the research for and against plastic bags section. It is not about the case. I will move it to a sandbox in case someone else wants to use the information for another article. I will be deleting in the next few days. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Uniquajanae (talk • contribs) 14:53, 4 March 2019 (UTC)
Deleting "Other Plastic Bag" section
editI will be deleting the Other Plastic Bag Litigation section within the next few days. It is not relevant to the case being discussed. I will move the information to a sandbox in case someone wants to use it for a more fitting article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Uniquajanae (talk • contribs) 14:56, 4 March 2019 (UTC)