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editI'm not sure what 'rivers with downfall' meant. It wouldn't be used in English. I changed the sentence; hope I didn't change the meaning. Cunningpal 13:10, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
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editInstead of 'mechanic production factories', which is not too meaningful in English, it would be better to say what the factories make. 'factories which manufacture . . . (whatever it is . . .)' Cunningpal 14:04, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
- That was nice of you. English isn't my best side. By downfall I think I meant "The end of the river".