Talk:Sary Shagan

Latest comment: 12 years ago by Secretlondon in topic Rating

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I have completed the B class checklist for the Military History project and believe this to be a Start class article. I believe that it could be improved by addressing the following:

  • Coverage: could the article be expanded with more content - i.e. discuss in more depth its development, use, operations, etc.
  • Structure: I think the article could be improved by including a few more sections, for example perhaps: Development, Operations, Facilties, Notes, References, See also, External links;
  • Supporting materials: are there any photographs that could be used to illustrate the topic?

Just a few ideas. If you would like more indepth comments, you might like to submit the article for peer review. This can be done by adding it to the list at WP:MHPR. Also, if you would like re-assessment in the future once changes have been made, you can do so by adding the article to the list at WP:MHA. Hope this helps. Good start, by the way. Thank you for your contribution. AustralianRupert (talk) 04:02, 16 April 2009 (UTC)Reply

This is a link to a photo essay on the remains at Sary Shagan (in Russian) http://www.olgino.info/index.php?ind=reviews&op=entry_view&iden=36 Secretlondon (talk) 01:41, 8 January 2012 (UTC)Reply

This is a link to news article from 2009 (in Russian) on the remaining 'Dnepr' radar, linked to by Russian wikipedia. Http://www.novosti-kosmonavtiki.ru/content/numbers/320/34.shtml Secretlondon (talk) 02:33, 8 January 2012 (UTC) Link to article (in Khazak I think) on the further collapse of the Daryal radar: http://stan.tv/news/14272/ Secretlondon (talk) 03:09, 8 January 2012 (UTC)Reply