Talk:Sarai Sherman

Latest comment: 4 years ago by Valetude in topic Too long

Too long

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This article seems over-loaded with material that is simply not encyclopedic. Although I am not an art expert, I'm fairly sure that the length is out of pro, relative to the notability of the subject. Much of the description of the work done in Italy and America reads like a poor translation, and seems to be based on the Marcello Venturoli book, but it is impossible to see how much of the text comes directly from there. This inhibits any major editing, as Wiki does not approve of the deleting of substantial references. Valetude (talk) 21:09, 20 September 2020 (UTC)Reply