Talk:San Giorgio-class cruiser

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Reviewer: Wilhelmina Will (talk · contribs) 02:37, 10 March 2015 (UTC)Reply

  • Well-written:
  •   With a few grammatical tweaks having been made, the article now complies with MOS policies on grammar, structure, and general layout. One hand on the mouse, one hand on the keyboard... and the feet can do the rest! Hee-hee! (talk) 02:06, 1 April 2015 (UTC)Reply

    (a) the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct 
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  •   The article has a healthy list of reliable sources in its bibliography; it makes frequent use of them and doesn't seem to contain any original research. One hand on the mouse, one hand on the keyboard... and the feet can do the rest! Hee-hee! (talk) 02:05, 1 April 2015 (UTC)Reply

    (a) it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline 
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    (a) it addresses the main aspects of the topic 
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    Ping--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 13:49, 31 March 2015 (UTC)Reply

    Ah, yes, I do need to get going with this one. I'll get on to that right now. One hand on the mouse, one hand on the keyboard... and the feet can do the rest! Hee-hee! (talk) 01:24, 1 April 2015 (UTC)Reply

      After checking this article against the criteria, I am satisfied it qualifies for GA-status. Congratulations! :) One hand on the mouse, one hand on the keyboard... and the feet can do the rest! Hee-hee! (talk) 02:07, 1 April 2015 (UTC)Reply

    insert if feel interesting

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    the four cruisers of the Pisa and this class were named after the 4 Repubbliche Marinare, being the two saints the patrons of Genova and Venezia

    there a few misprints of Marco (Marcos).

    The phrase

    San Giorgio, escorted by San Marco, ferried Crown Prince Umberto to South America in July–September 1924,[17][18] and then supported operations in Italian Somaliland in 1925–26.[14] The ship was disarmed and converted into a radio-controlled target ship in 1931
    

    is easy to be misunderstood as "the converted ship was the San Giorgio"



    pietro87.3.202.110 (talk) 09:23, 13 January 2017 (UTC)Reply