Talk:Samwise Gamgee/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 23:04, 15 May 2020 (UTC)

Criteria

1. Prose ✓ Pass

2. Verifiability ✓ Pass

3. Depth of Coverage ✓ Pass

4. Neutral ✓ Pass

5. Stable ✓ Pass

6. Illustrations ✓ Pass

7. Miscellaneous ✓ Pass

Comments

1.

• Not sure if fictional character needs to be linked, but if you think it should be, then keep as is.

Yes, it's quite marginal, removed.

• Link Gandalf in the lead

Done.

• Consistency on Orcs vs. orcs

Fixed.

• On a side note, I've been noticing that a lot of useful redirects got deleted when the articles they redirected to got deleted (partially my fault). I just recreated Hamfast Gamgee, and Helm Hammerhand had to be recreated a while back. A lot of useful things got deleted.

Yes, I've recreated a few when I came across gaps.

• "seed of the elvish Mallorn tree" Tolkien used mallorn, so that stylization is probably best

Done.

• Elves is a duplink

Fixed.

2.

• No action needed - Normally wordpress isn't a good source, but the author is described as "Author of Tolkien and the Great War, Mythopoeic Award winner and 2015 Fellow of the Black Mountain Institute", so since he's a subject-matter expert, the source is fine.

Noted.

• Access dates for non-archived online sources

Added.

• Ref 14 via parameter for newspapers.com

Done, I suppose it must help somebody.

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• The notes section is empty, it can probably be thrown into Orodruin

Aaaaaaaaargh Preciousssssss!

Just a few things to tidy up. Good work. Hog Farm (talk) 22:15, 16 May 2020 (UTC)

Many thanks. Chiswick Chap (talk) 06:56, 17 May 2020 (UTC)

Passing. Good work. Hog Farm (talk) 18:48, 17 May 2020 (UTC)