Talk:Sam Girard/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 22:50, 2 April 2020 (UTC)

Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 22:50, 2 April 2020 (UTC)

• Some of the references that are in French should have |language=French in their templates.  Done
• Some of the references seem to be missing |publisher=. Done
• Like others said on Discord, the lead should be a bit longer. Maybe talk more about his playing career, with the Preds and Avs? Done
• "Guylaine Dion" Didn't find her birth name in the article cited. Done
• Midget hockey is minkey, right? Minor ice hockey, right. Done
• "Girard moved in with Julie Robitaille" Best to mention her as a power skating coach here. Done
• "$35 million contract extension with the Avalanche, carrying an annual average of $5 million, on July 31, 2019, Girard." End of this sentence is missing something. Done
• Maybe add his hobby of relaxing to his personal life section. (what hobby?)
• References needed for All-Rookie Team and First All-Star Team nominations in the table. Done

Not too much to fix. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 02:52, 3 April 2020 (UTC)

Done except for one. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 03:21, 3 April 2020 (UTC)

Nova Crystallis, should be g2g. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 04:01, 3 April 2020 (UTC)