Talk:Sally Ridge

Latest comment: 11 years ago by 203.184.41.226 in topic bias/tone

bias/tone edit

Much of this article, especially the "Personal life" section, reads like an article from a women's magazine. It needs to be made more like the sort of article you'd expect in an encyclopedia...which means rewriting/removing dodgy prose like "The year 2010 was not good - and reflected the fallout of the post 2008 economy. A cencellation of an extensive tour of Europe with the Hotchins, and closure of Ridge's fashion retail stores James & August cemented an annus horribilis." Grutness...wha? 05:26, 2 April 2012 (UTC)Reply

I recommend the deletion of this article. This person has no claim to fame or to any notability.203.184.41.226 (talk) 06:09, 21 October 2012 (UTC)Reply