Talk:Salil Ankola/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Vibhijain (talk · contribs) 11:46, 28 March 2013 (UTC)

• Karachi is the lead should link to the stadium in which the match was played.
  • Done —Vensatry _{(Ping me)} 18:07, 28 March 2013 (UTC)
• "from the side after subsequent series'." - Remove '
  • My bad, removed —Vensatry _{(Ping me)} 18:07, 28 March 2013 (UTC)
• At age 28 --> At the age of 28
  • Placed a comma after 28 —Vensatry _{(Ping me)} 18:09, 28 March 2013 (UTC)
• "producing a few Hindi films" is misleading as he was an actor anf not the producer.
  • Done —Vensatry _{(Ping me)} 18:07, 28 March 2013 (UTC)
• "He made his first-class debut at the age of 20 for Mumbai in 1988–89." - Source needed
  • Done —Vensatry _{(Ping me)} 18:07, 28 March 2013 (UTC)
• BCCP should link to whatever it refers to
  • I could not find any link whatsoever, it's just a local team like Boar President's XI in India —Vensatry _{(Ping me)} 18:07, 28 March 2013 (UTC)
• "both would go on to become great cricketers on their own ways" - not needed and possibly POV
  • Rephrased the sentence —Vensatry _{(Ping me)} 18:07, 28 March 2013 (UTC)
• domestic and overseas tours --> domestic series and overseas tours
  • Done —Vensatry _{(Ping me)} 18:07, 28 March 2013 (UTC)
• You should tell the series for which Ankola was seleted
  • Which series are you talking about? —Vensatry _{(Ping me)} 18:07, 28 March 2013 (UTC)
    • "Despite being selected in the Test squads on domestic series and overseas tours" - Mention the series.
      • The source doesn't clearly mention which are those series. —Vensatry _{(Ping me)} 07:36, 29 March 2013 (UTC)
• he along with ... Bahutule were trained under Frank Tyson --> he along with ... Bahutule was trained under Frank Tyson
  • Done —Vensatry _{(Ping me)} 18:07, 28 March 2013 (UTC)
• Shortly after the Pakistan ... a daughter and a son. - The source doesn't says anything about Pak series.
  • Done —Vensatry _{(Ping me)} 11:46, 30 March 2013 (UTC)
• In a match that India heavily lost - Either quote heavily lost or use something more encyclopedic.
  • Done —Vensatry _{(Ping me)} 11:46, 30 March 2013 (UTC)

Will see if I can find any other problem, but otherwise the article is fine. ♛♚★Vaibhav Jain★♚♛ ^{Talk Email} 11:46, 28 March 2013 (UTC)

• Article passed Congrats! :) ♛♚★Vaibhav Jain★♚♛ ^{Talk Email} 11:59, 30 March 2013 (UTC)