Talk:Safe (Fringe)

GA Review

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Reviewer: ChessFiends (talk · contribs) 19:44, 3 May 2013 (UTC)

Very few problems, definitely GA quality TV episode article, I'll point out a few nitpicky tweaks to be made.

• It begins when "a group use" when a group uses
• "He obtained this technology two episodes ago, in "The Equation"." Plot summaries are supposed to be in-universe descriptions, so either remove this sentence, hatnote it or say something like he obtained this tech earlier with how he did it.
• "Loeb shoots him in the head" i've never seen this episode, does he do this courteously, to save him pain?
• link Frankfurt if it's the city
• "tells Jones the job" that the job
• "a word given to Jones in the episode "In Which We Meet Mr. Jones"" this seems more important information, maybe add this as a hatnote, or parenthesize it?

That's about it, well written stuff. ChessFiends (talk) 19:44, 3 May 2013 (UTC)

Thanks for reviewing. I believe I have addressed all of your concerns. Ruby 2010/2013 02:09, 4 May 2013 (UTC)

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