Talk:Sadie Harris/GA1
Latest comment: 11 years ago by TRLIJC19 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 06:26, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
Issues edit
General edit
- No dab links. Great work!
- No dead links. Great work!
Infobox edit
- Nothing, really.
Lede edit
- Unlink fictional character per WP:OVERLINK
- "series' producer" isn't it "series creator". Also, with the '.
- She is also a producer. I chose the word 'producer' because if I said "the character was created by series creator" it would sound redundant. I don't know what you mean by "with '."
Storylines edit
- "Harris and Meredith give each other nicknames; "Die" and "Death" respectively." citation/reference needed
- "The surgery goes wrong however and Harris' life is seriously endangered, though fortunately she is rescued by the residents." citation/reference needed
- "Some time" isn't needed
- "claims responsibility for the appendectomy". Awkward
- Meredith should be Grey, as per WP:MOS. Same for various others
- Link Europe
Development edit
- you really don't - that's the rule in this town." after don't should be an en-dash rather than a regular -.
- Too many "of" in the "Characterization" section. Consider re-prashing. Eg: "Writing for Entertainment Weekly, Michael Ausiello"
Reception edit
- There are no issues. Congrats!
External links edit
- Add link to the Grey's Anatomy Wiki episode link.
- Remove ABC Grey's Anatomy link. This is about the character, not the show
Will finish the rest later tonight. For now this is it. TBrandley 00:42, 24 July 2012 (UTC)