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Assessment edit
The lead section needs to summarize the entire article. It's rather weak in that respect currently and is the only issue holding the article up from a B-class rating. --Brad (talk) 18:22, 27 December 2009 (UTC)
As per your suggestion, the opening has been expanded. GRUBBXDN (talk) 21:52, 28 December 2009 (UTC)
Design and Dev. Clarification edit
The first sentence reads British and American recognized from the beginning that. There seems to be a noun missing. I'd add Captains, Entrepreneurs, or Shipping Companies, but I really don't know what the original author intended. It's been this way from the first edit. --Joshrulzz (talk) 22:13, 30 December 2009 (UTC)
Glitch edit
"Britannia Class, which was also commissioned in 1840." Which was the ship commissioned in 1840? Made a stab at it, but please vet my edit. Thank you.--Wetman (talk) 02:25, 31 December 2009 (UTC)