Talk:SMS Orjen/GA1

Latest comment: 5 years ago by Peacemaker67 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 08:15, 9 August 2019 (UTC)Reply


This article is in good shape. I have a few comments:

  • in the lead, suggest "or in Libya"→"or was based in Italian Cyrenaica or Italian Tripolitania" and link
  • suggest turning lk=in for the displacement to link long tons
  • "The ship turned away" which ship?
  • suggest "and used a torpedo to sink one of the drifters maintaining it"
  • I reckon U-boats should be u-boats
  • comma after "see the coast"
  • Royal Italian navy and Regia Marina are both linked. Suggest "Regia Marina (Royal Italian Navy)" and linking only at first mention
  • link Eastern Mediterranean?
  • "Taranto, Italy,"
  • where in Libya was she assigned? This may help with the lead linking, as there is Italian Cyrenaica and Italian Tripolitania at this point
  • not necessary here, but a map of the Adriatic with main locations would be useful
  • image licensing is ok

That's me done, placing on hold for the above to be addressed. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 08:58, 9 August 2019 (UTC)Reply