Talk:SMS Kaiserin und Königin Maria Theresia/GA1
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Reviewer: Ed! (talk · contribs) 13:17, 28 June 2012 (UTC)
- "Kaiserin und Königin Maria Theresia saw extensive service with the fleet." -- I'd be hesitant to include this sentence given the length of the article, because then it feels incomplete. I think it would be better to just take it out.
- Fair enough.
- "decided to follow the Kaiser Franz Joseph I-class ships with a larger vessel, a larger, better armed armored cruiser" -- This is a real mouthful, might want to reduce the repetition of "larger" with another word.
- Changed.
- "As designed, the ship displaced 5,330 metric tons" -- this is different from what the infobox says.
- Should be 5,330 - fixed the infobox.
- " She also carried eight Krupp 8 cm SK L/35 guns, twelve Skoda 4.7 cm SK L/44 guns, six Hotchkiss 47 mm L/33 guns, and a pair of 7 cm L/15 landing guns" -- might want to clarify what these guns were to be used for; the layman won't understand why there are so many different kinds of guns.
- Added a bit of explanation.
- Dup link tool shows one result: SMS Kaiser Karl IV
- Removed.