Talk:SMS König Wilhelm/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: FAC Wikicopter _{what i do} s + c cup|former 02:48, 18 March 2011 (UTC)

Comments

• More info on precisely why the Wilhelm was the largest ship in the German Navy in the body and lede. FAC Wikicopter _{what i do} s + c cup|former 02:48, 18 March 2011 (UTC)
  • Added a line to the body - I don't know that more detail would be suitable for the lead. Parsecboy (talk) 08:56, 18 March 2011 (UTC)
    • And why she was the most powerful.
      • Does that really need to be spelled out? Shouldn't that be an obvious conclusion for a reader to make? Parsecboy (talk) 22:56, 20 March 2011 (UTC)
        • Perhaps compare her to the other ships of her age. FAC Wikicopter _{what i do} s + c cup|former 00:39, 21 March 2011 (UTC)
          • I added a note comparing the ship to the preceding two ships and succeeding two classes. Parsecboy (talk) 00:55, 21 March 2011 (UTC)
• Gravesend is a dab in the infobox. FAC Wikicopter _{what i do} s + c cup|former 02:48, 20 March 2011 (UTC)
  • Fixed. Parsecboy (talk) 22:56, 20 March 2011 (UTC)
• Really sorry I didn't get to this earlier. I was on wikibreak. Comments to come in a few minutes: FAC Wikicopter _{what i do} s + c cup|former 20:51, 3 April 2011 (UTC)
• I don't see almost anything about WWI service, except a change of support ship.
  • Beyond that, there isn't anything else. Fix that, and I'll pass. FAC Wikicopter _{what i do} s + c cup|former 20:57, 3 April 2011 (UTC)
    • That's cause she didn't do anything else during WWI - she was 50 years old by then ;) Parsecboy (talk) 22:44, 3 April 2011 (UTC)

Haha. Passed. FAC Wikicopter _{what i do} s + c cup|former 03:05, 7 April 2011 (UTC)