Talk:SMS Cöln (1909)/GA1

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Reviewer: MisterBee1966 (talk · contribs) 13:36, 16 January 2012 (UTC)Reply

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:  
    B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:  
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:  
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:  
    C. No original research:  
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:  
    B. Focused:  
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:  
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:  
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:  
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:  

Based on HRS v2 pages 179 to 181

  • planed to be powered with Heinrich Zoelly steam turbines manufactured by Zurich's Maschinenfabrik Escher Wyss & Cie. p180
  • christened by mayor de:Max Wallraf p180
    • Both added - anything else from HRS?
  • Yes, Fregattenkapitän Hans Zenker was her commander from October 1911 to September 1913
    • Added.

Comment: The articles of Cöln, Kolberg and Augsburg all state they are the lead ship of the class. I assume Kolberg is the real lead ship.:) But this should be changed. Pindanl (talk) 17:33, 3 February 2012 (UTC)Reply