Talk:SMS Baden (1880)/GA1

Latest comment: 12 years ago by Starstriker7's Sidekick in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Starstriker7 - public(talk) 04:07, 18 July 2011 (UTC)Reply

I'll take on this review. --Starstriker7 - public(talk) 04:07, 18 July 2011 (UTC)Reply

Criterion 1

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Lead

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Construction

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  • "Dürr boilers" - Can you wikilink this?
  • Can you wikilink "armored citadel"?
    • Unfortunately, there don't appear to be any articles that would be good links. Parsecboy (talk) 13:44, 20 July 2011 (UTC)Reply

Service History

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  • Decapitalize "History" in the section title.
  • Can you wikilink "I Division" and "II Division" like in the other articles.
  • "which displaced Württemberg and her three sisters to the II Division." - Wouldn't it make more sense to exchange Württemberg with Baden?
    • Fixed the first and third, as for the links, I'm not entirely sure what the best course of action is. The article will probably end up at I Battle Squadron with section headers for the I and II Divisions, but I'd rather hold off adding links until I actually write the article and set up the section headers. Parsecboy (talk) 13:44, 20 July 2011 (UTC)Reply

Criterion 2

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The article is thoroughly referenced with offline book references. Inline citations and separate reference sections are used. All clear here.

Criterion 3

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The article has no obvious gaps, and is sufficiently focused.

Criterion 4

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The article's tone is neutral.

Criterion 5

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The article's revision history suggests that the article is stable.

Criterion 6

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Both articles' images check out.

Overall comments

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Keep 'em coming. You are doing a great job. --Starstriker7 - public(talk) 04:20, 18 July 2011 (UTC)Reply

Looks good. I'll pass this article momentarily. --Starstriker7 - public(talk) 00:13, 21 July 2011 (UTC)Reply