Talk:Ryan Arcidiacono/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 21:18, 21 July 2014 (UTC)

I'll review this article shortly; it's been waiting too long for one. Wizardman 21:18, 21 July 2014 (UTC)

Here are the issues I found:

• "Ryan Curran Arcidiacono (born March 26, 1994) is an American college basketball player for Villanova where he is a sophomore on the 2013–14 team." Written that way makes it dated. I'd say put his year in the infobox instead but I don't think there's an option for that. End with Villanova for the first sentence, then you can add his current class status later in the lead.
• "where Joe was offensive lineman on the football team." was an offensive
• there's a couple spots where I feel like a cite would be helpful (the plastic hoop and the injury/35 points as examples), but I'm presuming cite two is used for those facts, since that's the cite in the following ones. if this is not the case add a cite for them.
• Make sure ndashes are being used for scores rather than hyphens.
• " The Redskins reached the state quarterfinals in 2011 before losing to Penn Wood." This is the first time Neshaminy's team name is noted, and it's pretty deep in the section. Maybe use it earlier to make it clearer?

I'll put the article on hold and pass when fixed. Wizardman 22:34, 25 July 2014 (UTC)

I see the main author hasn't been active, so I'll give this another week. Wizardman 16:41, 1 August 2014 (UTC)

Went ahead and made the fixes myself since they were quick; GAN passes. Wizardman 02:04, 4 August 2014 (UTC)