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Date of death discrepancy
editBoth findagrave entries list dateofdeath as June 1, but neither include a marker, so I have left the existing unsourced date untouched. Dru of Id (talk) 05:47, 24 September 2011 (UTC)
Poorly written
editAmong other issues with this article is the lack of an effective transition between the section "Early life" and "Accomplishments" which starts off "He later created a smaller domestic version..." Seems that something is missing, i.e., what did he create previously?EdJF (talk) 19:13, 29 January 2020 (UTC)