Talk:Roxen (singer)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 15:21, 15 April 2020 (UTC)

Am going to review this article as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk) 15:21, 15 April 2020 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Early life and career

• "Born in Cluj-Napoca on 5 January 2000 as Larisa Roxana Giurgiu," - more grammatically correct; Born Larisa Roxana Giurgiu on 5 January 2000 in Cluj-Napoca,
• "was released in the November of the same year" - released later that year in November
• "In an interview," - please state who conducted the interview
• "she was revealed as the Romanian representative." - revealed by TVR
• "were released on 21 February 2020." - I don't think the year is necessary here since it is already mentioned earlier in the paragraph
• ""Alcohol You" emerged as the winner of the national final." - please state the date for clarity
• Delink China per MOS:OVERLINK
• "Although TVR had considered sending "Alcohol You" to participate in the Eurovision Song Contest 2021," - {{xt|retaining "Alcohol You" as a song for

References

• Reference 2 is missing the author of the story
• Reference 7 should mention that it is written in Romanian

Will put the review on hold to allow the nominator to address/respond to the queries raised above. MWright96 (talk) 16:23, 15 April 2020 (UTC)

@MWright96: Thank you for the review, I have addressed all your points. Cartoon network freak (talk) 17:34, 15 April 2020 (UTC)

• @Cartoon network freak: Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 18:12, 15 April 2020 (UTC)