Talk:Ron Terwilliger

Latest comment: 7 years ago by 38.104.0.126 in topic Edit requested on 16 August 2016

Philanthropy edit

Saw Ron Terwilliger on the Faces of Philanthropy website & noticed his wiki had only a small amount of information regarding the subject. Added a Philanthropy section, and moved some pertinent information from his background section into this new one. Sir. Somerset (talk) 00:58, 17 December 2010 (UTC)Reply

Expanded edit

I went ahead and organized the existing content while expanding the article and adding additional references. Sir. Somerset (talk) 01:22, 28 December 2010 (UTC)Reply

Edit requested on 16 August 2016 edit

Edits I made to this page have been removed. There is incorrect information here. J. Ronald Terwilliger was born in FEBRUARY 1941. Also, many of the resource links listed are now outdated and broken. One even goes to a page with inappropriate content at the top (sexually explicit).

Additionally, the topic of Sports needs to be deleted and a topic of Philanthropy needs to be added. If we are not able to make edits, then the whole page needs to be deleted. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 38.104.0.126 (talk) 12:43, 16 August 2016 (UTC)Reply

Your edits were removed because by copying text from an outside source, you may have inadvertently added copyright infringing material to a Wikipedia article. I removed the month of birth because it was unsourced, but unless you provide a reliable source stating that Terwilliger was born in February 1941, I will be unable to modify the article accordingly. There were seven dead resource links, and I was able to repair four of them. I removed the page you objected to, as it does not meet Wikipedia's reliable source guidelines. Please give a reason for why the "Sports" section should be deleted. As far as I can tell, there is already a section on Terwilliger's philanthropy, so I see nothing more to do there. Best, Altamel (talk) 21:54, 20 August 2016 (UTC)Reply

What proof do you need that Mr. Terwilliger was born February 1941? HE is the one that would like the sports section removed. It is all past history and he is no longer involved with the team. His focus is on philanthropy and is greatly expanded. The awards list needs to be expanded also. What text did I copy from an outside source???? Please provide specifics. Thank you. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 38.104.0.126 (talk) 17:30, 24 August 2016 (UTC)Reply