Talk:Roger Farmer (American football)/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: BeanieFan11 (talk · contribs) 21:58, 25 September 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 13:15, 30 September 2024 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

• Any info on his parents? I wonder if he is actually Barbadian like the lead says (Barbadian nationality law). Is there a source that says that?
  • The only thing I've found is just that he was born there. I changed it to "Barbadian-born" – does that work?
• "later had a stint with the Baltimore Colts" Offseason stint
  • Added.
• Any further info on when he moved to US. Body just says "later".
  • Haven't found anything.
• "an National Association" Change an to a.
  • Fixed.
• Add first-team All-American and All-HAAC to infobox.
  • Added.
• Link training camp. There is a specific article just for NFL training camp.
  • Added.
• Change Jets tenure in infobox to 1979. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 13:15, 30 September 2024 (UTC)
• @WikiOriginal-9: Changed tenure as well. I think I addressed everything. BeanieFan11 (talk) 15:23, 30 September 2024 (UTC)

  Ok, that looks good. Nice work! ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 15:41, 30 September 2024 (UTC)

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