Talk:Rocky Butte/GA1
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Reviewer: Casliber (talk · contribs) 13:39, 16 January 2019 (UTC)
Ok, you know the drill.....will jot stuff below. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 13:39, 16 January 2019 (UTC)
The volcano erupted between 285,000 years and 500,000 years ago.- the first "years" is redundant...?- lead a little small for an article this size...?
The butte lies within the Portland city limits- this is repetitive in this sentence. I'd remove it and combine with the first sentence segment "Rocky Butte lies in the northeast part of Portland" somehow.Portland's climate is moderate,-is "moderate" an official term? If not remove and let facts speak for themselves
- ...and precipitation is not typically very heavy, allowing for vegetation, which can hamper fieldwork in the area - this is confusing. makes it sound like hte vegetation hampers fieldwork...or is it heavy rain...or not heavy rain....
- I think I clarified this. Basically, there's lots of secondary growth, which prevents fieldwork from effectively clearing land. The source says: "The moderately heavy rainfall and mild climate promote a lush vegetation that is a deterrent to fieldwork. Uncultivated cleared or burned-over land commonly supports abundant second-growth including gorse, huckleberry, nettles, poison-oak, salal, wild blackberry, many varieties of fern, and smaller fast-growing deciduous trees such as alder and vine maple." Let me know if this needs further tweaking or clarification. ceranthor 14:59, 17 January 2019 (UTC)
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or cemetery applications in the early 20th century- huh??
- ...and precipitation is not typically very heavy, allowing for vegetation, which can hamper fieldwork in the area - this is confusing. makes it sound like hte vegetation hampers fieldwork...or is it heavy rain...or not heavy rain....
Otherwise, looks and reads well. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 00:46, 17 January 2019 (UTC)
- @Casliber: Thanks for your helpful comments. I think I've addressed them all now. ceranthor 15:21, 17 January 2019 (UTC)
- Also, would appreciate any feedback at Wikipedia:Peer review/Newberry Volcano/archive1 if you have some spare time, since your GA review there was helpful. ceranthor 18:45, 17 January 2019 (UTC)
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OK all good. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 03:58, 18 January 2019 (UTC)