Talk:Rockefeller Guest House/GA1
Latest comment: 3 years ago by Epicgenius in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 23:30, 1 July 2021 (UTC)
Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:30, 1 July 2021 (UTC)
Basic stuff and comments
edit- Infobox and lead both look good.
- "on the site provided inspiration for" → "on the site inspired"
- Remove the hyphen between "dressing-room".
- John D. Rockefeller Jr.. - remove double period.
- Remove the comma after "placing his bid".
- "at a cost of" - kinda wordy so reword
- Sources look great. Article is well-sourced.
- Broad in coverage and stable.
- Images are free-to-use.
- Wikilink Grace Glueck.
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- Thanks. I've done these. Epicgenius (talk) 23:09, 2 July 2021 (UTC)
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