Talk:Roberta M. Feldman

Latest comment: 7 months ago by 8barzmusic in topic Promotional or Advertising copy in this article

Promotional or Advertising copy in this article

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I find this namespace reads entirely like a promotional or puff piece. The language (if I may) needs to be neutral and objective, and everything has to be sources properly verified and qualitative. Wikipedia:Verifiability would be a good read about verifiable sources needed.

Please take some time to find verifiable sources and find a way to write the page more objectively. There are many articles on how to write these namespaces. Wikipedia:Adverts Wikipedia:Neutral point of view are some good starts that I read to get started.

happy writing. 8barzmusic (talk) 20:59, 24 March 2024 (UTC)Reply