Talk:Robert White (West Virginia state senator)/GA1

Latest comment: 9 years ago by West Virginian in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk · contribs) 12:09, 1 September 2015 (UTC)Reply

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

West Virginian: Sorry about the delay, comments below

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

Issues

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  • Which inline citation does the second source point to?
  • Are you sure reference #32 is reliable?
  • Reference #32 was an exhaustive inventory of the cemeteries in Hampshire County performed by local historians and volunteers alike. I photographed the headstones in the cemetery so the photographs can vouch for the information provided by that source as well. Thank you for the catch though! -- West Virginian (talk) 13:42, 6 September 2015 (UTC)Reply
  • What illness he died from?
  • It is unecessary to put cites like this "The sun is red.[1] The sun is hot.[1]"